• class critiquingo
•some of the comments
-super busy! Handwriting in type and Image disnt go with the style!
-looks a little messy
-sharper type on font
-txt could be more clear
-focus more on type graphs
-txt in the images could have been thought about more
- lose the handwriting kid!
• positive feed back
-love the line work
-work well as a set
-so detailed and accurate love the monotone work
- tone king
-could proper imagine opening a comic to see this in a book!
-the king
• The feed back I got was mainly aimed at the txt I had used, I tried to go for a comic book stlye don't and did it my self, I should have printed it off the computer to make it work. I was told to experiment with colour, yes I should but I wanted these to be black and white to work as a set, I felt using colour would brake them up, I wanted it to almost look like they had been taken from the same environment and using colour would disturb that and make them look like they had been taken from different parts of the world.
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